Audience feedback

For our audience feedback we asked the year thirteens to watch our film opening so they could give us tips on improving. As there five different girls we were able to get a variation in detailed answers on the positives and negatives. What we showed the year thirteens was one of our drafts as we hadn't completely finished on making our final product.

The Agoraphobic

- Perhaps use some quicker cuts when the postman arrives at the door to show more of a panic

- The just shot of the wine cabinet is perhaps on for too short of a time

- The lightning is really good as well, so once colour graded it'll look even better!

- Shots are formed and strong

- Where is the background sounds?

- There is quite a lot of different shots which starts to make the narrative unclear

- Love the open shot. focus is very good and love pace

- Once shot doesn't quite match up

- Add sound 

- Strong and good lighting

- Good sense of enigma at the beginning where your not establishing your character straight away

- Perhaps you might need to add a lot of sound effects

- Quite strong narrative

- Some very strong depth shots, others are quite weak

-some drops in match on action (with book)

- too many shots, too quick 

- Lighting well framed